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People don't need to compare themselves because the most important thing is indivisual's ideal. For example, I like black, another likes navy, the other likes blue. Everyone has another ideal. They just keep their ideal thing.
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People don\'t need to compare themselves because the most important thing is indivisual\'s ideal.
>>People don\'t need to compare themselves because the most important thing is the individual\'s ideal.
For example, I like black, another likes navy, the other likes blue.
>>CORRECT!
Everyone has another ideal.
>>CORRECT!
They just keep their ideal thing.
>>Therefore, they just have to keep their ideal thing.
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