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2015-10-02 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Give your thoughts about this question; What the world would be like in 10 years? In 10years, I think the world isn't big changed. But I think science technology, information technology and medical technology will improve than now. And most of jobs are change by new jobs, like there are no typist. But I will work relate with information technology, so I feel releived. -- And the actor's name is "PARK SEO JOON", and I agree that he is not handsome at first time. But if you watch his drama, you can experience that he is handsome guy. I recommend you some of his drama. One is <kill me, heal me>, and <She was pretty> is what I watched just before our class. Second one is on air, so every weekday I wait next episodes. I don't like to wait the story, but it is so funny and interesting to don't watch. If you have some times, watch them. It is good to your homebuddy life. hahaha. Good night.

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Happy Friday, [이름]! Thank you for once again sharing your ideas about the topic. You have great thoughts to share and I enjoy reading them! Take note of the corrections that I have for you here and study harder as usual. Keep up the god job! Thank you for sharing about those dramas too! I will definitely search for them and watch them if I have time. :) I really like watching Korean dramas because they are so interesting. Korean dramas have a really good story to tell! Plus, some actors are really handsome too and they make my heart skip a beat!! Hahaha! Anyway, see you later! Take care!!   Teacher Carmen ^^   HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Give your thoughts about this question;What the world would be like in 10 years?In 10years, I think the world isn\'t big changed. >> I think that there wouldn\'t be a big change in the world in 10 years.   But I think science technology, information technology and medical technology will improve than now. >> But I think science, information and medical technology will improve compared to what we have now.   And most of jobs are change by new jobs, like there are no typist. >> And most types of jobs will change. For example, there might be no typist in the future.   But I will work relate with information technology, so I feel releived.>> But I feel relieved because I will be working in a company which is related to information technology.--And the actor\'s name is \"PARK SEO JOON\", and I agree that he is not handsome at first time. >> The actor\'s name is Park Seo Joon. I agree that he is not handsome at first glance.   But if you watch his drama, you can experience that he is handsome guy. >> But if you watch dramas where he starred in, you can realize that he is a good looking guy.   I recommend you some of his drama. >> I will recommend you to watch some of those dramas where he starred in.   One is <kill me, heal me>, and <She was pretty> is what I watched just before our class. >> The title of the first Korean drama is \"Kill Me, Heal Me\". And the drama which is entitled, \"She was Pretty\", was the one I was watching yesterday before our class.   Second one is on air, so every weekday I wait next episodes. >> The second Korean drama is still on air everyday so I am always waiting for the next episodes.   I don\'t like to wait the story, but it is so funny and interesting to don\'t watch. >> I don\'t like to wait for the story but it is so funny and interesting for me to not watch it.   If you have some times, watch them. >> If you have some time, you could watch them.   It is good to your homebuddy life. hahaha. Good night. >> It is good for your home buddy kind of life. Hahaha! Good night.

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