Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. Great job! Check my corrections below, okay?
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
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Thank you for showing me those nice pictures.
>> CORRECT!
I was surprised by the height of the Free Fall tower.
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I don\'t think I will try to do that.^^
>> I don\'t think I would ever try doing that.
1. Lee Jae-yong, the vice chairman of Samsung, was born as a grandson of the founder of Samsung, Lee Byung-chul.
>> Lee Jaeyong, the Vice Chairman of Samsung, was the grandson of the founder of Samsung, Lee Byungchul.
It is said that he has everything handed to him on a silver platter.
>> CORRECT!
2. I am always worried about human relations.
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This is a hard nut to crack.
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This is also a matter of concern during one\'s life because our society attaches great important to human relations.
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>> importance
3. Recently, the method of the public nomination is very hot potato in Korean politics.
>> Recently, the method of public nomination is a hot potato in Korean politics.
Some politicians suggested a new way of public nomination that people participate in the process of a public nomination.
>> Some politicians suggested a new way where people will participate in the process of nomination.
However, the other politicians thinks existing method that only members of a party can participate in the process of a public nomination should be maintained.
>> However, the other politicians think that the existing method, where only members of a party can participate in the process of a public nomination, should be maintained.
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