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2015-10-04 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, teacher. Thank you for showing me those nice pictures. I was surprised by the height of the Free Fall tower. I don't think I will try to do that.^^ 1. handed to someone on a silver platter 2. hard nut to crack 3. hot potato 1. Lee Jae-yong, the vice chairman of Samsung, was born as a grandson of the founder of Samsung, Lee Byung-chul. It is said that he has everything handed to him on a silver platter. 2. I am always worried about human relations. This is a hard nut to crack. This is also a matter of concern during one's life because our society attaches great important to human relations. 3. Recently, the method of the public nomination is very hot potato in Korean politics. Some politicians suggested a new way of public nomination that people participate in the process of a public nomination. However, the other politicians thinks existing method that only members of a party can participate in the process of a public nomination should be maintained.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. Great job! Check my corrections below, okay?

Ciao!

~Teacher Marie~

Hello, teacher.

>> CORRECT!
 Thank you for showing me those nice pictures.

>> CORRECT!
 I was surprised by the height of the Free Fall tower.

>> CORRECT!
 I don\'t think I will try to do that.^^
>> I don\'t think I would ever try doing that.
 1. Lee Jae-yong, the vice chairman of Samsung, was born as a grandson of the founder of Samsung, Lee Byung-chul.

>> Lee Jaeyong, the Vice Chairman of Samsung, was the grandson of the founder of Samsung, Lee Byungchul.

It is said that he has everything handed to him on a silver platter. 

>> CORRECT!
 2. I am always worried about human relations.

>> CORRECT!

This is a hard nut to crack.

>> CORRECT!

This is also a matter of concern during one\'s life because our society attaches great important to human relations.

>> CORRECT!

>> importance
 3. Recently, the method of the public nomination is very hot potato in Korean politics.

>> Recently, the method of public nomination is a hot potato in Korean politics.

Some politicians suggested a new way of public nomination that people participate in the process of a public nomination.

>> Some politicians suggested a new way where people will participate in the process of nomination.

However, the other politicians thinks existing method that only members of a party can participate in the process of a public nomination should be maintained.

>> However, the other politicians think that the existing method, where only members of a party can participate in the process of a public nomination, should be maintained.


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