Homework

2015-10-05 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Say something about something that you can’t resist in a maximum of 5 sentences. I'm a obidient person, so I usually don't resist my parents's saying. I'm a only child of them, and I don't want to worry. And mostly, I don't want to make some troubles. So I usually don't resist my parents's saying. But if I think something is unfair, then I talk to them and try to make fairly.

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Good Evening, [이름]!! Thank you for answering your homework. You really never fail to surprise me with your thoughts! I really appreciate your effort to answer today\'s topic! Keep on practicing your writing skills and soon you can master the correct way to express your thoughts in English! Great job! See you in class! I\'m so excited to hear your stories! :)))   Teacher Carmen ^^     HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Say something about something that you can’t resist in a maximum of 5 sentences.I\'m a obidient person, so I usually don\'t resist my parents\'s saying. >> I\'m an obedient person so I usually don\'t disregard what my parents are saying.   I\'m a only child of them, and I don\'t want to worry. >> I\'m the only child so I don\'t worry much.   And mostly, I don\'t want to make some troubles. >> And mostly, I don\'t want to make troubles.   So I usually don\'t resist my parents\'s saying. >> So I usually obey what my parents are saying.   But if I think something is unfair, then I talk to them and try to make fairly. >> But if I think something is unfair then I talk to them and try to make things fair.

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