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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday, Adam!
Being in this industry for several years, I\'ve learned about your culture and it is really interesting ;)
I am so happy to have a student like you, who is very respectful and gentle^^
I think it\'s not being late acceptible in our culture.
>>I think being late is not acceptable in our culture.
We regard that treating older people politely is very important.
>>CORRECT!
But these manner is not difficult. So people can easily follow our custom.
>>This manner is not difficult, so people can easily follow our custom.
Also we are generous to foreigners so we teach some manners to them.
>>We are also generous to foreigners so we teach some manners to them.
People can learn our culture quickly.
>>CORRECT!
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