Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
We have another holiday this week.
Koreans celebrate Hangul Day on October 9.
Anyway, could you review my composition today?
This is a part of my writings about political thought of East Asia.
1. This paper considers the connection between 'The Classic of History' and a statesman, Jeong Do-jeon's writings written at the beginning of Chosun Dynasty.
2. Since Chosun Dynasty was founded on the Korean peninsula in 1392, Jeong Do-jeon had designed political power of a new political community, Chosun through the writings such as A, B and C.
3. In addition, they considered the relations between D and E as the both sides of relations.
4. As a neo-Confucianist, Jeong Do-jeon paid attention to 'the Classic of History', which describes fair principles and rules by which the Two Great Emperors and Three Great Kings of Ancient China ruled the world.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! Yes, I\'ve heard about that holiday too. Do you have plans with your family?
Anyway, I checked your writing below. Please review it.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT! We have another holiday this week.
>> CORRECT! Koreans celebrate Hangul Day on October 9.
>> CORRECT! Anyway, could you review my composition today?
>> CORRECT! This is a part of my writings about political thought of East Asia.>> CORRECT! 1. This paper considers the connection between \'The Classic of History\' and a statesman, Jeong Do-jeon\'s writings written at the beginning of Chosun Dynasty.
>> This paper considers the connection between \"The Classic of History\" and the statesman, Jeong Do-jeon\'s writings which were written at the beginning of the the Chosun Dynasty.
2. Since Chosun Dynasty was founded on the Korean peninsula in 1392, Jeong Do-jeon had designed political power of a new political community, Chosun through the writings such as A, B and C.
>> CORRECT! 3. In addition, they considered the relations between D and E as the both sides of relations.
>> In addition, they considered the relations between D and E as both sides of the relations.
4. As a neo-Confucianist, Jeong Do-jeon paid attention to \'the Classic of History\', which describes fair principles and rules by which the Two Great Emperors and Three Great Kings of Ancient China ruled the world.
>> CORRECT!
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