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2015-10-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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It's not easy to come over when someone who face a challenge. A challenge as itself is burden to us and give a concern. But If we get over like this burden trying to do a challenge. That is great opportunities to improve ourself. I agree that facing challenge improves a person. Because hardship make person mature. We can learn from like this experience. Then we don't need to afraid when we meet difficult situation.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름].

We all face challenges in life but it differs on the way we handle  it. So, we need to be strong and be firm in dealing challenges in life.

Just think positive and everything will be fine.....Smile!!!!

Thank you for you homework, you were able to express you opinion about the topic. Great job!!!

I know that learning is a challenge but you just have to do your best in order for you to be successful

T. Jeny

 

It\'s not easy to come over when someone who face a challenge.

>>When someone is facing a challenge, it\'s not easy for her/him to overcome it.
A challenge as itself is burden to us and give a concern.

>>The challenge itself is a burden and we need to be concern about it.
But If we get over like this burden trying to do a challenge.
That is great opportunities to improve ourself.

>>But if we get over the burden, it will give great opportunities for us to improve.

I agree that facing challenge improves a person. Because hardship make person mature.

>>I agree that facing challenges improve a person because those hardships will make him/her mature.

We can learn from like this experience. Then we don\'t need to afraid when we meet difficult situation.

>>We can learn from these experiences and we don\'t need to be afraid in encountering difficult circumstances in life.

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