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2015-10-06 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Good morning, teacher. On January 3, I will depart from Seoul to Cebu City with my son. It's my first time to study abroad. So, I'm a little afraid of that. I should prepare for this training course well. 1. one smart cookie 2. piece of cake 3. put all of your eggs in one basket 1. I think Sam is one smart cookie. I was thinking to dispose of stocks in the warehouse for a long time. By the way, he suggested an innovative idea, so I can sell all my stocks. 2. These days, I am teaching the way to read a clock. "Listen, it's a piece of cake." But, my son's response was not positive. "Mom, it's not a piece of cake. It's still difficult for me." After hearing that, I regretted my teaching method. I should get a new teacher for him. 3. When I decided to quit my job and enter a graduate school, many people advised not to put all of my eggs in one basket. However, I thought this challenge was worth trying.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. Don\'t fret. I will help you prepare for your trip to Cebu City. I\'ll have you ready for it in no time. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Good morning, teacher. >> CORRECT! On January 3, I will depart from Seoul to Cebu City with my son. >> CORRECT! It\'s my first time to study abroad. >> CORRECT! So, I\'m a little afraid of that. >> CORRECT! OR >> I\'m a little anxious about that. I should prepare for this training course well. >> CORRECT! 1. I think Sam is one smart cookie. >> CORRECT! I was thinking to dispose of stocks in the warehouse for a long time. >> CORRECT! By the way, he suggested an innovative idea, so I can sell all my stocks. >> However, he suggested an innovative idea, so now I can sell all my stocks. 2. These days, I am teaching the way to read a clock. >> These days, I am teaching my son how to read time. \"Listen, it\'s a piece of cake.\" >> CORRECT! But, my son\'s response was not positive. >> CORRECT! \"Mom, it\'s not a piece of cake. >> CORRECT! It\'s still difficult for me.\" >> CORRECT! After hearing that, I regretted my teaching method. >> CORRECT! I should get a new teacher for him. >> CORRECT! 3. When I decided to quit my job and enter a graduate school, many people advised me not to put all of my eggs in one basket. >> CORRECT! However, I thought this challenge was worth trying. >> CORRECT!

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