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2015-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: What is your greatest dream? Answer this topic in a maximum of 5 sentences. When I was highschool student, I fall in love in a korean singer, and every freetime I searched him on the internet and watched his broadcasting programs. Even it was the period that 2 weeks before the exams, but I couldn't stop to watch his programs, so I need to reduced my sleep to prepare the exam. And then someday he came to my dream.(KK HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA) Dream was to short and I forgot the story about that, but the fact that I met him in my dream is more important than what the story was. I was so happy and I could start the day very willingly.

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Hi there, [이름]! Thanks for doing your part very well in our class. I am learning about your interests and ideas in class. You have a very good personality! Don\'t ever change! I am happy to hear about your dream. I had a couple of crazy dreams like that too. HAHAHA! :) You did a great job and continue that! See you tomorrow! Good night!   Teacher Carmen ^^   HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:What is your greatest dream? Answer this topic in a maximum of 5 sentences.When I was highschool student, I fall in love in a korean singer, and every freetime I searched him on the internet and watched his broadcasting programs. >> When I was a high school student, I fell in love with a Korean singer, and during my free time I searched for him on the internet and watched his shows.   Even it was the period that 2 weeks before the exams, but I couldn\'t stop to watch his programs, so I need to reduced my sleep to prepare the exam. >> Even though it was just 2 weeks before the exams, I coldn\'t stop watching his programs. So I needed to reduced my sleeping hours just to prepare for the exam.   And then someday he came to my dream.(KK HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA) ] >> And then one day, he appeared on my dream. (KK HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA)   Dream was to short and I forgot the story about that, but the fact that I met him in my dream is more important than what the story was. >> The dream was too short and I forgot about that, but the fact that I met him in my dreams was more important than what the story was.   I was so happy and I could start the day very willingly. >> I was so happy and I could willingly start the day.

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