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2015-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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It was a good time to talk to you... Our time is so short..hehe I think we don't have any hero in Korea... I don't know...anything about heroes in Korea.. Like superman, batman ninga tirtles and so on are from U.S.A right? Actually, I am not into these stories...hehe so..I haven't thought about being a hero.. Just one thing that I don't like to be a hero, I would be very busy.. Having special abilities means that I need to help and use the power in good ways.. But for now...I am so busy...hehehe 1. If I were you, I would apologize to her right away. (to be) 2. If I run into her, I will tell her that you're looking for her. (to tell) 3. If you do that again, I will call the police. (to do) 4. He would never have asked her out on a date if she didn't kiss him first. 5. If you were her, what would you do? (to do)

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Hello there, Miss [이름]!Americans really love making stories about people with superpowers. But I prefer reading or watching ordinary people with no superpowers and yet are able to make a difference. Like the girl from pakistan who is fighting for the right to education and women\'s rights. I think she is amazing. ^^Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Miss [이름]! See you later! Teacher Anne   It was a good time to talk to you... >> Correct!Our time is so short..hehe >> Corrrect!I think we don\'t have any hero in Korea... >> Correct!I don\'t know...anything about heroes in Korea.. >> Correct!Like superman, batman ninga tirtles and so on are from U.S.A right? >> Like Superman, Batman, Ninja Turtles and so on are from the U.S.A. right?Actually, I am not into these stories...hehe so..I haven\'t thought about being a hero.. >> Correct!Just one thing that I don\'t like to be a hero, I would be very busy.. >> One thing that I don\'t like about being a hero is that I would be very busy,Having special abilities means that I need to help and use the power in good ways.. >> Correct!But for now...I am so busy...hehehe >> Correct!1. If I were you, I would apologize to her right away. (to be)>> Correct!2. If I run into her, I will tell her that you\'re looking for her. (to tell)>> Correct!3. If you do that again, I will call the police. (to do)>> Correct!4. He would never have asked her out on a date if she didn\'t kiss him first. >> Correct!5. If you were her, what would you do? (to do) >> Correct!

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