Homework

2015-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Say something about what can you do to succeed in life in a maximum of 5 sentences. I think I have to upgrade my skills of everything, like language, hacking, speach and so on. And I think personal connections are important too. Because people can't live alone. And lastly, express my love to my family, friends. If I do all of this one, I can talk I lived succeed life.

강사 첨삭

Good Evening, [이름]! Thank you for sharing your thoughts about our topic! you are definitely right about those ways to be successful in life. I wish to see you succeed in whatever thing you wanted to do. I will always be here to guide you in as much as I can! See you later!   Teacher Carmen ^^   HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Say something about what can you do to succeed in life in a maximum of 5 sentences.I think I have to upgrade my skills of everything, like language, hacking, speach and so on. >> I think I have to improve my skills in everything like about language, hacking, speech and so on.   And I think personal connections are important too. >> Correct!   Because people can\'t live alone. >> It is because a person can\'t live alone.   And lastly, express my love to my family, friends. >> Lastly, I need to express my love to my family and friends.   If I do all of this one, I can talk I lived succeed life. >> If I do all these things, then I can say that I lived a successful life.

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