Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Say something about what can you do to succeed in life in a maximum of 5 sentences.
I think I have to upgrade my skills of everything, like language, hacking, speach and so on. And I think personal connections are important too. Because people can't live alone. And lastly, express my love to my family, friends. If I do all of this one, I can talk I lived succeed life.
강사 첨삭
Good Evening, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about our topic!
you are definitely right about those ways to be successful in life.
I wish to see you succeed in whatever thing you wanted to do. I will always be here to guide you in as much as I can!
See you later!
Teacher Carmen ^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Say something about what can you do to succeed in life in a maximum of 5 sentences.I think I have to upgrade my skills of everything, like language, hacking, speach and so on.
>> I think I have to improve my skills in everything like about language, hacking, speech and so on.
And I think personal connections are important too.
>> Correct!
Because people can\'t live alone.
>> It is because a person can\'t live alone.
And lastly, express my love to my family, friends.
>> Lastly, I need to express my love to my family and friends.
If I do all of this one, I can talk I lived succeed life.
>> If I do all these things, then I can say that I lived a successful life.
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