Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! I checked your proposal below. Please review it.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
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Today is a holiday.
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I hope you have a nice time.
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I am writing a proposal for participating in an international conference.
>> I am writing a proposal for the international conference that I am participating in.
Below is a part of that proposal.
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Could you read and review this?
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The three countries of East Asia, namely China, Korea and Japan, belong to the East Asian cultural sphere, which is also called Confucian culture.
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Virtually, traditional East Asian political thoughts have had great influence on the politics in the three East Asian countries, not only in the premodern era when it worked as the ruling principle, but also in the modern political system where it professes liberal democracy or socialism.
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Therefore, it can be said that there is an inextricable link between the Confucian Classics and the politics of the three East Asian countries.
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In this respect, this panel explores the Confucian Classics and political thoughts, and also considers how those political thoughts are realized at their realistic politics.
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