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2015-10-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Civility can flourish, but only if the upcoming generation a.) wants to do it. 2. When it comes to success, a majority of people assume that making it to the top a.) needs hard work and maturity. 3. The question isn’t who is going to let me, it’s who’s going to a.) work with me. 4. The Indian woman has come a long way in terms of carving her own identity in fields hitherto a.) dominated by the male workforce. 5. Radha is an extremely talented dancer but is shy by nature. Her master advised her a.) to open up and talk to people.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름], Thank you for answering your homework. I can see you\'re trying hard to learn. Your discipline is good, keep it up. Keep applying in your daily life what you learn everyday. Knowledge will give you power. Power will give the confidence that you need.  You can do it, if others can, so can you. Enjoy your day! ^^T. Jeny     1. Civility can flourish, but only if the upcoming generation a.) wants to do it.>>c. decides to spread that quality around.2. When it comes to success, a majority of people assume that making it to the top a.) needs hard work and maturity.>> b. requires ethical compromises.3. The question isn’t who is going to let me, it’s who’s going to a.) work with me.>> c. stop me4. The Indian woman has come a long way in terms of carving her own identity in fields hitherto a.) dominated by the male workforce.>>correct5. Radha is an extremely talented dancer but is shy by nature. Her master advised her a.) to open up and talk to people. >>c. not to hide her light under a bushel.

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