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2015-10-12 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Hi~~^^ Good morning!*^^* Did you have good weekend? It was rainy here in Korea so I had movie night with my roommates.. It is "Am Sal (Assassination)" There are so many excellent ators and actresses. I hope that you can watch this!! I am not also good at organizing things but I try to do my best to put it back after I used it.. It is hard but I don't also like to clean up all at once.. As I am getting older...I am changing in good ways..hehe See you soon 1. The plane took off ( = departed) at 7:00 AM. 2. After Bill was fired, John took over( = assumed) his position. 3. He took on ( = started) smoking after his accident. 4. They will have to take up ( = compete against) another opponent. 5. He really takes after his father. = He is really similar to his father.

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Hello, Miss [이름]!
I will definitely check it out. The title itself is interesting. ^^ Movie nights are the best, I think. But sometimes, one of my friends will always fall as[이름]p before the movie ends, so sometimes we play small pranks on them. ^^

See you tomorrow!
Teacher Anne

 

Hi~~^^ Good morning!*^^*

>> Correct!
Did you have good weekend?

>> Did you have a good weekend?
It was rainy here in Korea so I had movie night with my roommates..

>> Correct!
It is \"Am Sal (Assassination)\" There are so many excellent ators and actresses.

>> It\'s called \"Am Sal (Assassination)\". There are so many excellent actors and actresses in the movie.
I hope that you can watch this!!

>> Correct!
I am not also good at organizing things

>> Correct!

but I try to do my best to put it back after I used it..

>> Correct!

It is hard but I don\'t also like to clean up all at once..

>> Correct!
As I am getting older...I am changing in good ways..hehe

>> Correct!
See you soon.

>> Correct!
1. The plane took off ( = departed) at 7:00 AM.

>> Correct!
2. After Bill was fired, John took over( = assumed) his position.

>> Correct!
3. He took on ( = started) smoking after his accident.

>> Correct!
4. They will have to take up ( = compete against) another opponent.

>> take on
5. He really takes after his father. = He is really similar to his father.

>> Correct!

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