Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Say something about how you would spend a million dollars in a maximum of 5 sentences.
If I have a million dollars, I will give half of them to my parents. And I will buy a building where in gang-nam, korea by my name. And rest of them, I will save at the bank. Because I'm so young to use much money wisely, so when I become an adult, I will use them wisely.
강사 첨삭
Good Evening, [이름]!
How was your weekend? I hope that you are doing just fine.
I loved how you answered your homework. It is very wise and kind of you to be thinking that way.
I would have done the same if I get that huge amount of money. :)
Great job for today, [이름]!! However, be mindful of the corrections, okay?
I am here to correct and help you so that you can be a great English communicator someday!
Good luck and see you later! I miss you! :)
Teacher Carmen ^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Say something about how you would spend a million dollars in a maximum of 5 sentences.If I have a million dollars, I will give half of them to my parents.
>> If I have a million dollars, I will give half of it to my parents.
And I will buy a building where in gang-nam, korea by my name.
>> And I will buy a building which is under my name in Gang-nam, Korea.
And rest of them, I will save at the bank.
>> I will save the rest of the money in the bank.
Because I\'m so young to use much money wisely, so when I become an adult, I will use them wisely.
>> It is because I am still young to spend the money so that when I get older I can use it wisely.
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