Homework

2015-10-12 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Say something about how you would spend a million dollars in a maximum of 5 sentences. If I have a million dollars, I will give half of them to my parents. And I will buy a building where in gang-nam, korea by my name. And rest of them, I will save at the bank. Because I'm so young to use much money wisely, so when I become an adult, I will use them wisely.

강사 첨삭

Good Evening, [이름]! How was your weekend? I hope that you are doing just fine. I loved how you answered your homework. It is very wise and kind of you to be thinking that way. I would have done the same if I get that huge amount of money. :) Great job for today, [이름]!! However, be mindful of the corrections, okay? I am here to correct and help you so that you can be a great English communicator someday! Good luck and see you later! I miss you! :)   Teacher Carmen ^^   HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Say something about how you would spend a million dollars in a maximum of 5 sentences.If I have a million dollars, I will give half of them to my parents. >> If I have a million dollars, I will give half of it to my parents.   And I will buy a building where in gang-nam, korea by my name. >> And I will buy a building which is under my name in Gang-nam, Korea.   And rest of them, I will save at the bank. >> I will save the rest of the money in the bank.   Because I\'m so young to use much money wisely, so when I become an adult, I will use them wisely. >> It is because I am still young to spend the money so that when I get older I can use it wisely.

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