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2015-10-13 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Good morning, teacher Marie! The way of my losing weight is very simple. I don't eat less than usual. As you mentioned today, skipping a meal might be bad for my health. Anyway, I already lost the 300g for last 2 days. hahaha~~~ Make a sentence or give an example situation using the following idioms about happiness/sadness: 1. on cloud nine 2. cry one's eyes out 3. like a dog with two tails 1. Recently, my department announced the list of scholarship this semester. My name was in the list. When I found out that I got a scholarship, I was really on cloud nine. 2. I can't remember when I cry my eyes out. I think it's because I get used to be patience with age. However, crying one's eyes out is sometimes good for stress relief. 3. When my husband brought my son back some Legos from his business trip, my son was like a dog with two tails.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. Good luck with your diet. I hope you can stick to your routine until the end. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Good morning, teacher Marie! >> CORRECT! The way of my losing weight is very simple. >> My method of losing weight is very simple. I don\'t eat less than usual. >> CORRECT! As you mentioned today, skipping a meal might be bad for my health. >> CORRECT! Anyway, I already lost the 300g for last 2 days. hahaha~~~ >> Anyway, I have already lost 300g these last two days. 1. Recently, my department announced the list of scholarship this semester. >> Recently, my department announced the list of scholars for this semester. My name was in the list. >> My name was on the list. When I found out that I got a scholarship, I was really on cloud nine. >> CORRECT! 2. I can\'t remember when I cry my eyes out. >> CORRECT! I think it\'s because I get used to be patience with age. >> I think it\'s because I get to be more patient with age. However, crying one\'s eyes out is sometimes good for stress relief. >> GOOD! >> OR: However, crying my eyes out is sometimes good to relieve stress.3. When my husband brought my son back some Legos from his business trip, my son was like a dog with two tails. >> CORRECT!

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