Homework

2015-10-13 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Write something about your fears in a maximum of 5 sentences. I feel scared at dying. Everyday, I afraid that what can I do if my parents are die? or if I die. I feel very fear. I know all of the people will die at someday, but I don't want to experience that. Because I love my people so much and I don't want to lose them.

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A pleasant evening to you, [이름]! How are you doing? I wish that you are doing just fine while reading this. I know you have a lot of things in mind but I would like to congratulate you for always doing a good job in making your homework! I am learning about your thoughts everyday and I am grateful for every experience! Keep it up! Have a great life! Don\'t let your fears overcome your dreams and aspirations! Live life to the fullest!   Teacher Carmen ^^     HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Write something about your fears in a maximum of 5 sentences.   I feel scared at dying. >> I\'m scared of dying.   Everyday, I afraid that what can I do if my parents are die? or if I die. >> I\'m afraid of that everyday and I don\'t know what to do if my parents or I will die someday.   I feel very fear. >> I\'m very afraid. OR>> I am very frightened.   I know all of the people will die at someday, but I don\'t want to experience that. >> I know everyone will die someday, but I don\'t want to experince that.   Because I love my people so much and I don\'t want to lose them. >> It is because I love the people in my life so much and I don\'t want to lose them.

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