Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Write something about your fears in a maximum of 5 sentences.
I feel scared at dying. Everyday, I afraid that what can I do if my parents are die? or if I die. I feel very fear. I know all of the people will die at someday, but I don't want to experience that. Because I love my people so much and I don't want to lose them.
강사 첨삭
A pleasant evening to you, [이름]!
How are you doing? I wish that you are doing just fine while reading this.
I know you have a lot of things in mind but I would like to congratulate you for always doing a good job
in making your homework! I am learning about your thoughts everyday and I am grateful for every experience!
Keep it up! Have a great life! Don\'t let your fears overcome your dreams and aspirations! Live life to the fullest!
Teacher Carmen ^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Write something about your fears in a maximum of 5 sentences.
I feel scared at dying.
>> I\'m scared of dying.
Everyday, I afraid that what can I do if my parents are die? or if I die.
>> I\'m afraid of that everyday and I don\'t know what to do if my parents or I will die someday.
I feel very fear.
>> I\'m very afraid.
OR>> I am very frightened.
I know all of the people will die at someday, but I don\'t want to experience that.
>> I know everyone will die someday, but I don\'t want to experince that.
Because I love my people so much and I don\'t want to lose them.
>> It is because I love the people in my life so much and I don\'t want to lose them.
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