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Rules and limitations contribute to a person's happiness. Without limitations, our life can't be regular. People without self-restraint always want to drink alcohol, go to club and do shopping. We should have rules to improve our quality of life.
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Wow! I love your answer, Adam!
It might seem daunting when we think of rules, but I know it is also for our own good.
Have a great day, Adam!
Rules and limitations contribute to a person\'s happiness.
>>CORRECT!
Without limitations, our life can\'t be regular.
>> Without limitations, our life can\'t be normal.
People without self-restraint always want to drink alcohol, go to club and do shopping.
>>CORRECT!
We should have rules to improve our quality of life.
>>CORRECT!
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