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2015-10-14 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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Happy wednesday Chalie!^^ I disagree with that idea. I've usually believed past is really important in life since I thought present always exists through past experience. Whatever the present is successful or not it is result of past and if people get something not enough, they can achieve better thing later through that experience. That will be their past. As for me, when I faced some problem I tried to recall if I had a similar experience with it before and if I had it was surely helpful to solve the problem. Similarly, I can not help giving an example history is definitely significant in human society. It is impossible to develop present without knowing what was happened in the past. So, what I mean is that this point can not be stressed too much.

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Hello [이름]! ^^   Happy Wednesday to you! ~~ I definitely agree with your last statement that the importance of the past cannot be stressed enough. The knowledge that we get from the past is immeasurable. ^^ Thank you for your wonderful essay. ^^   Oh! I did read about what you told me last Monday; the phrase \"Boys, be ambitious!\" The complete quote is:   “Boys, be ambitious! Be ambitious not for money or for selfish aggrandizement, not for that evanescent thing which men call fame. Be ambitious for the attainment of all that a man ought to be.” These words seem to have spread from an edition of the “Vox Populi, Vox Dei” column from March 16, 1964. I am familiar with  “Vox Populi, Vox Dei” but not the quote and thanks to you, I learned something new. ^^   Thank you [이름]. ~~~   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==   I disagree with that idea. I\'ve usually believed past is really important in life since I thought present always exists through past experience. >> I disagree that the past has no value for those of us living in the present. I\'ve been led to believe that the past is really important in our lives since I think that the present exists because of the past.   Whatever the present is successful or not it is result of past and if people get something not enough, they can achieve better thing later through that experience. That will be their past. >> Whether the present is a success or not, it is basically the result of past actions and when people are not satisied with what they got, they can get something better through their experiences or through their past. As for me, when I faced some problem I tried to recall if I had a similar experience with it before and if I had it was surely helpful to solve the problem. >> As for me, when I face a problem, I try to recall whether I have had a similar experience before and if I have, it would surely be helpful in solving the problem.   Similarly, I can not help giving an example history is definitely significant in human society. It is impossible to develop present without knowing what was happened in the past. So, what I mean is that this point can not be stressed too much. >>  Similarly, human history is another significant example I cannot help but give. It is impossible to establish the present without knowing what has happened in the past. My point being is that the importance of the past cannot be stressed enough.

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