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2015-10-14 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Good morning!!*^^* It is a sunny and cool day. It is already Wednesday..hehe let's enjoy the day..Weekend is waiting for us.^^ I realized that there are not easy jobs in the world. Everything is difficult just that the way is different. I thought being a part teacher will be very easy but there are some problems as well. Just for me, teaching children is the easiest job..because I got used it.. 1. How much money do you want? Give me 10 dollars. 2. I gave him the money that I found. 3. She is the only person here that speaks Japanese. 4. I live in London. 5. This kind of the weather makes me happy.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Miss [이름]!
A bright and happy day to you too! Indeed, all jobs are hard. It\'s just a matter of getting used to it. Still, I admire you for working in a care home for the elderly. Not everyone can do that job. So, stay strong and keep on!
Teacher Anne

 

Good morning!!*^^*It is a sunny and cool day.

>> Correct!
It is already Wednesday..hehe let\'s enjoy the day..Weekend is waiting for us.^^

>> Correct!
I realized that there are not easy jobs in the world.

>> Correct!
Everything is difficult just that the way is different.

>> Everything is difficult, but each one just different in their own ways.
I thought being 
 a part teacher will be very easy but there are some problems as well.

>> I thought being a part-time teacher will be very easy but there are some problems as well.
Just for me, teaching children is the easiest job..because I got used it..

>> It\'s just that for me, teaching children is the easiest job because I got used it

1. How much money do you want? Give me 10 dollars.

>> Correct!
2. I gave him the money that I found.

>> Correct!
3. She is the only person here that speaks Japanese.

>> Correct!
4. I live in London.

>> Correct!
5. This kind of the weather makes me happy.

>> Correct!

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