HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, Miss [이름]!
A bright and happy day to you too! Indeed, all jobs are hard. It\'s just a matter of getting used to it. Still, I admire you for working in a care home for the elderly. Not everyone can do that job. So, stay strong and keep on!
Teacher Anne
Good morning!!*^^*It is a sunny and cool day.
>> Correct!
It is already Wednesday..hehe let\'s enjoy the day..Weekend is waiting for us.^^
>> Correct!
I realized that there are not easy jobs in the world.
>> Correct!
Everything is difficult just that the way is different.
>> Everything is difficult, but each one just different in their own ways.
I thought being a part teacher will be very easy but there are some problems as well.
>> I thought being a part-time teacher will be very easy but there are some problems as well.
Just for me, teaching children is the easiest job..because I got used it..
>> It\'s just that for me, teaching children is the easiest job because I got used it
1. How much money do you want? Give me 10 dollars.
>> Correct!
2. I gave him the money that I found.
>> Correct!
3. She is the only person here that speaks Japanese.
>> Correct!
4. I live in London.
>> Correct!
5. This kind of the weather makes me happy.
>> Correct!
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