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You are right! It is a good weather to go on a picnic but unfortunatly,
I don't have any plans to go on a picnic..I should have a blind date soon..hoho^^
This Saturday I will go to the flea market in An Yang.
I want to buy some materials like flag cards, books and so on.
They are second hands but if I look for good products, I can buy good ones in low
prices I hope that it won't be rainy this Saturday.
As you ask me, I do want to believe the destiny..but I don't believe it.
And also it hasn't happend in my life...It only happends in the TV.ㅜㅜ
However, I am always dreaming that I can meet my soulmate by destiny..*^^*
It is funny. Right?
1. My brother goes to college.
2. I understand English.
3. My friends always laugh at my jokes.
4. The weather in California is perfect.
5. Our cats s[이름]p all day
강사 첨삭
Hello, Miss [이름]!I also used to believe in destiny when I was in high school. But as I grew older, I realized that destiny is what we make of it. So I stopped believing in destiny, too. ^^ But just like you, I also wish destiny was true. ^^Teacher Anne
You are right! It is a good weather to go on a picnic but unfortunatly, I don\'t have any plans to go on a picnic..
>> Correct! [unfortunately]
I should have a blind date soon..hoho^^
>> Correct!This Saturday I will go to the flea market in An Yang.>> Correct!
I want to buy some materials like flag cards, books and so on.
>> Correct!They are second hands but if I look for good products, I can buy good ones in low prices
>> Correct!
I hope that it won\'t be rainy this Saturday.>> Correct!As you ask me,
>> As you have asked me,
I do want to believe the destiny..but I don\'t believe it.
>> Correct!
And also it hasn\'t happend in my life...
>> Correct! [happened]It only happends in the TV.ㅜㅜ
>> It only happens on TV.However, I am always dreaming that I can meet my soulmate by destiny..*^^*
>> Correct!It is funny. Right?
>> Correct!1. My brother goes to college.
>> Correct!2. I understand English.
>> Correct!3. My friends always laugh at my jokes.
>> Correct!4. The weather in California is perfect.
>> Correct!5. Our cats s[이름]p all day.
>> Correct!
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