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Adam! I am so proud of you too!
I wish I can also be an engineer ;)
However, I am happy being a teacher if I have a student like you^^
Keep it up!
Last semester, I studied very hard.because I prepared college\'s exam and certification exam.
>>Last semester, I studied very hard because I was preparing for my college and certification exam.
So I didn\'t take a rest at last semester.
>>So I didn\'t take a rest last semester.
>>Therefore, I didn\'t take enough rest last semester.
As a result, I got certication about chemical engineering engineer and I was at the first grade.
>>As a result, I passed the certification about chemical engineering and I got the top score.
That was my first time so I wad very happy and that was the proudest time in my life.
>>That was my first time so I was very happy and that was the proudest time of my life.
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