Homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Who is your greatest influence in life? Write in a maximum of 5 sentences.
My mother is my greatest influence in my life. It's because my father frequent travel to work, so my mother usually grow me up single-handed. This fact makes me feel responsible, and makes me do more harder in everything. It is very great influence to me.
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Good evening, [이름]!
Happy Thursday! I hope that you are just fine while reading this.
I noticed that you have a very good heart and it is because of your influnce in life.
Cherish your moment with your mother and your father always.
They made you who you are today. Stay happy and see you later!
Teacher Carmen ^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Who is your greatest influence in life? Write in a maximum of 5 sentences.My mother is my greatest influence in my life.
>> Correct!
OR>> My greatest influence in life is my mother.
It\'s because my father frequent travel to work, so my mother usually grow me up single-handed.
>> It is because my father frequently travels for work so my mother usually raised me by herself.
This fact makes me feel responsible, and makes me do more harder in everything.
>> This makes me feel responsible and do better in everything.
It is very great influence to me.
>> It greatly influenced me.
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