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2015-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

학생이 쓴 원문

These days studying English is the best priority for me. I am always interested in fleuncy about English. So I enjoy watching american movie. It's not easy to understand the whole sentences but I try. I focus on dialogue. Speaking English fluently is my goal.

강사 첨삭

Don\'t worry, Adam!

I am here to support you all throughout your English journey!

Take care of yourself!

These days studying English is the best priority for me.

>>These days studying English is my priority.

 I am always interested in fleuncy about English. So I enjoy watching american movie.

>>I am always interested in English fluency, so I enjoy watching American movie.

It\'s not easy to understand the whole sentences but I try.

>>It\'s not easy to understand all sentences but I try.

 I focus on dialogue.

>>I focus on the dialogue.

Speaking English fluently is my goal.

>>CORRECT!

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