Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Write about your motto in life in a maximum of 5 sentences.
My motto in my life is ' when I treat people, do gently'. I think people is the best property. If I treat them greatly, they treat me gently too. No one can live one's life alone. Of course it's not too kindful, it's amount of properly.
----------Can you understand my sentences? kk hahaha see you later.--
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!
I am wishing that while you\'re reading this you are in a good condition.
I understood your point about your homework but somehow we need to work on how you construct your sentences. Use simple words in your sentences. Be straight to the point. Try to hit the message by choosing approproate words and try to consult your English dictionary about the meaning to see if can be an effective word in your sentences.
However, you have given a good job! Thank you for always doing your part!
I will help you all throughout the way. Good luck!! See you later!
Teacher Carmen ^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Write about your motto in life in a maximum of 5 sentences.My motto in my life is \' when I treat people, do gently\'.
>> My motto in life is \"When you treat people, treat them kindly\".
I think people is the best property.
>> YOU MEAN TO SAY. I think people are the greatest treasure a person could ever have.
If I treat them greatly, they treat me gently too.
>> If I treat them kindly, they will also treat me well too.
No one can live one\'s life alone.
>> No one can live one.
Of course it\'s not too kindful, it\'s amount of properly.
>> Of course, we should not always be too kind to other people. Thus, we should just treat them in an appropriate amount of kindness.----------Can you understand my sentences? kk hahaha see you later.--
>> Correct!
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