Homework

2015-10-19 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Describe your favorite place in a maximum of 5 sentences. My favorite place is my highschool's backyard. Eventhough I can't go there now, but I have a lot of memory at there, and I can be relax and emotional. My friends and I ate snacks and chated and take a rest at breaktime. We prepared the school argument contest, took the picture, and studied. I miss there and miss them too. Have a nice weekend.>_<

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Good day to you, [이름]! How are you doing? I hope that you are in a good condition. I just read your answers about your favorite place and I was also reminiscing about my high school days. I know you had a lot of good times in that place but also try to have more good memories with your friends and family outside the comfort of your own home now. Okay? Hehe! Thank you for answering your homework and keep it up!!   Teacher Carmen ^^   HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Describe your favorite place in a maximum of 5 sentences.My favorite place is my highschool\'s backyard. >> My favorite place is my high school\'s backyard.   Eventhough I can\'t go there now, but I have a lot of memory at there, and I can be relax and emotional. >>I have a lot of memories there where I can relax and be emotional however, I cannot even go there anymore.   My friends and I ate snacks and chated and take a rest at breaktime. >> My friends and I ate snacks, took a rest and chatted there during our break time.   We prepared the school argument contest, took the picture, and studied. >> We also prepared for our debate, took pictures and studied there.   I miss there and miss them too. >> I miss that place and the people I was with there before.Have a nice weekend.>_< >> Correct!  

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