Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
I just came back home.
This trip was very nice.
Perhaps this trip will be linger long in my memory.
See you tomorrow.^^
There is a blue pill which can take you to the past and a red pill which can take you to the future. Which one would you take? Why?
If I have to select one pill among these two choices, I'd like to chose a blue pill.
There are two reasons why I chose a blue pill.
First, I don't want to see my future in advance.
If I already know my future, I won't feel my present life is interesting.
I think that what I know my future is by no means happy.
Next, I often regret not sufficiently taking care of my sun due to my work in the past.
If I can go to the past, I would go to those days when my son was still a baby.
So, I'd like to spend enough time with my son.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. I\'m glad you had a great time with your family last weekend.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT! I just came back home.
>> CORRECT! This trip was very nice.
>> CORRECT! Perhaps this trip will be linger long in my memory.
>> Perhaps this trip will linger in my memory for a long time.
See you tomorrow.^^
>> CORRECT! If I have to select one pill among these two choices, I\'d like to chose a blue pill.
>> CORRECT!
>> theThere are two reasons why I chose a blue pill.
>> CORRECT!
>> theFirst, I don\'t want to see my future in advance.
>> CORRECT! If I already know my future, I won\'t feel my present life is interesting.
>> If I already know about my future, my present life won\'t feel interesting.
I think that what I know my future is by no means happy.
>> I want to think that my future is going to be happy.Next, I often regret not sufficiently taking care of my sun due to my work in the past.
>> I often regret not taking care of my son due to my work in the past.
If I can go to the past, I would go to those days when my son was still a baby.
>> CORRECT! So, I\'d like to spend enough time with my son.
>> CORRECT!
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