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2015-10-19 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. I just came back home. This trip was very nice. Perhaps this trip will be linger long in my memory. See you tomorrow.^^ There is a blue pill which can take you to the past and a red pill which can take you to the future. Which one would you take? Why? If I have to select one pill among these two choices, I'd like to chose a blue pill. There are two reasons why I chose a blue pill. First, I don't want to see my future in advance. If I already know my future, I won't feel my present life is interesting. I think that what I know my future is by no means happy. Next, I often regret not sufficiently taking care of my sun due to my work in the past. If I can go to the past, I would go to those days when my son was still a baby. So, I'd like to spend enough time with my son.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. I\'m glad you had a great time with your family last weekend. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! I just came back home. >> CORRECT! This trip was very nice. >> CORRECT! Perhaps this trip will be linger long in my memory. >> Perhaps this trip will linger in my memory for a long time. See you tomorrow.^^ >> CORRECT! If I have to select one pill among these two choices, I\'d like to chose a blue pill. >> CORRECT! >> theThere are two reasons why I chose a blue pill. >> CORRECT! >> theFirst, I don\'t want to see my future in advance. >> CORRECT! If I already know my future, I won\'t feel my present life is interesting. >> If I already know about my future, my present life won\'t feel interesting. I think that what I know my future is by no means happy. >> I want to think that my future is going to be happy.Next, I often regret not sufficiently taking care of my sun due to my work in the past. >> I often regret not taking care of my son due to my work in the past. If I can go to the past, I would go to those days when my son was still a baby. >> CORRECT! So, I\'d like to spend enough time with my son. >> CORRECT!

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