homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
I hope you\'ll feel better soon.
Yes, we do have some experiences in life that we can learn a lesson from. But life must go on and we have to influence our kids to be a better person with becoming a good example for them.
T. Jeny
Hi^^ I had rasik surgery last week.
>>Hi, I had a Lasik surgery last week.
I could not talking with you because of eyes pain.
>>I could not talk with you because my eyes are in pain.
Now, The pain is fortunately releaseing.
>>Fortunately, it is getting better now.
But I decide to have relaxing time. But not far. See you soon.
>>I decided to take a rest but not that long. See yu soon.
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I think My life was very much affected from my parents.
>>I think, my life is very much affected from my parents.
>>I think, my parents affected my life in a big way.
It does not mean completely positive part.
>>It is not all in a positive way.
>>It doesn\'t mean that they completely affected me in a positive way.
I think that the attitude of parents is most important to their children.
>>I think that the attitude of parents is very important to children.
My temper that sometimes easy to exciting seems to resemble my mother and the temper that hard to say sorry seems to come from my father.
>>I got my mother\'s temper where I easily get excited. On the other hand, I resemble my father, where it is difficult for me to say sorry.
I hope to influence to my boy better thing than I got things from my parents.
>>I hope I can influence my boy in a better way than what I got from my parents.
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