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2015-10-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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What's one event that has made you stronger? Social experience made me stronger. I experienced many things such as worring some problems and hand[이름]g matter, interaction with people so on. This has made me improve.

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Experience has taught us many things.^^ Thank you for sharing your thoughts here. Now I am looking forward to reading more of your compositions. Until then. Stay strong! What\'s one event that has made you stronger?Social experience made me stronger. >>Correct OR >>Social experiences me stronger. >>My experiences made me stronger.I experienced many things such as worring some problems and hand[이름]g matter, interaction with people so on. >>I experienced many things from worrying about some problems, hand[이름]g matters, to interacting with people.This has made me improve. >>These have improved me.

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