Homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Describe any hobbies you have, sports you participate in, or other activities you regularly enjoy in a maximum of 5 sentences.
I'm enjoy in watching movies, and listening musics. It's because I don't like outdoor activity. And when I feel loneliness, I watch romantic moive or listen exciting song. When I do that, I feel better. And I feel I'm like a hero of that movie.
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I'm like a promotor of my friend's group. kk, I promote about her group to my friends. Anyway, my friend(TWICE Jihyo)'s Music Video is released. If you have some times, please watch that once. She has the red hair, wearing the pink clothes, and has many vocal parts. I'm very proud of her. See you later. >_<
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Good Evening [이름]!
Thank you again for writing something about our topic!
I appreciate your effort in answering your homework. You have given correct thoughts about the topic itself!
Anyway, I will watch your friend\'s video later. I am so excited to see her. Maybe you can ask her to give me an autograph!
I wish that they will be very successful! I also wish the same for us. kkk! :)
See you later!
Teacher Carmen ^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Describe any hobbies you have, sports you participate in, or other activities you regularly enjoy in a maximum of 5 sentences.I\'m enjoy in watching movies, and listening musics.
>> I enjoy watching movies and listening to music.
It\'s because I don\'t like outdoor activity.
>> It\'s because I don\'t like an outdoor activity.
And when I feel loneliness, I watch romantic moive or listen exciting song.
>> And I watch romantic movies or listen to exciting songs whenever I feel lonely.
When I do that, I feel better.
>> Correct!
OR>> I feel better when I do that.
And I feel I\'m like a hero of that movie.
>> And I feel like I\'m the hero in that movie.-----I\'m like a promotor of my friend\'s group.
>> I\'m like a promoter of my friend\'s group.
kk, I promote about her group to my friends.
>> I promote her group to my friends.
Anyway, my friend(TWICE Jihyo)\'s Music Video is released.
>> Anyway, my friend\'s music video was already released.
If you have some times, please watch that once.
>> If you have some time, please watch it.
She has the red hair, wearing the pink clothes, and has many vocal parts.
>> Her hair is red, she is wearing pink clothes and she has many vocal parts in the music video.
I\'m very proud of her.
>> Correct!
See you later. >_<
>> Correct!
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