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2015-10-21 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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HI! How are you? I hope that you are fine. I heard that there is a typhoon now..TT I am praying for you. See you soon! 1. Q: Is dad picking us up today? A: Nope, mom's picking us up. 2. Q: Who's that? A: That's the guy I told you about last week. 3. Q: Why are you so upset? A: I'm not upset. You're the one who's upset. 4. Q: Is this the bad time? Should I call you later? A: Yes, please call me in 30 minutes. 5. Q: How do you like my dress? A: Wow! That's the one beautiful dress!

강사 첨삭

Thank you for doing your homework.

Yes, we have a typhoon.

I heard that the typhoon is one of the strongest typhoon in the Philippines.

The roads are slipper with debris but I am fine.

Thank you for your concern.

Teacher Anne

Here are your corrections:

HI!

>> CORRECT

>> OR: Hello!
How are you?

>> CORRECT

>> OR: How have you been?
I hope that you are fine.

>> CORRECT

>> OR: I hope that you are doing well.
I heard that there is a typhoon now..TT

>> CORRECT

>> OR: I heard that your country is experiencing a typhoon now.
I am praying for you.

>> I will be praying for you.
See you soon!

>> CORRECT

>> OR: I hope to see you soon!

1. Q: Is dad picking us up today?
A: Nope, mom\'s picking us up.
>> CORRECT

2. Q: Who\'s that?
A: That\'s the guy I told you about last week.
>> CORRECT

3. Q: Why are you so upset?
A: I\'m not upset. You\'re the one who\'s upset.
>> CORRECT
4. Q: Is this the bad time? Should I call you later?
A: Yes, please call me in 30 minutes.
>> Is this a bad time? Should I call you later?
5. Q: How do you like my dress?
A: Wow! That\'s the one beautiful dress!

>> No article - Wow! That\'s one beautiful dress!

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