HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Wanting to change from my tradition is being closed with old people.
In Korea, young people shoul respect old people in many ways like
the words, behaviors, and so on. So it is really hard to aproach to old people first.
If I could change one, I want to change this..so we caould be closer each other..^^
1. I am speaking to you. I have spoken to you.
2. That man is driving a car. That man has driven a car.
3. My friend is s[이름]ping. My friend has slept .
4. She is in Prague. She has been in Prague.
5. They are arguing about money. They have argued money.
강사 첨삭
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Generational differences can be a problem in the society sometimes.
Problems can arise from differing mindsets, communication styles and how the traditions are being followed by people from different generations.
The older generation could accuse the younger generation of being to radical and liberal minded.
While the younger generation could also accuse the older generation for being too traditional and narrow minded.
Because of this, establishing a close relationship and narrowing down the gap could be a great challenge.
I guess, if people would only learn how to give and take as well as compromise then they should come to terms and establish a better kind of relationship.
After all, change is the only permanent thing in this world and at some point, people have adapt.
Wanting to change from my tradition is being closed with old people.
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Wanting to change from my tradition is being closed with old people.>> I would like to change the tradition regarding the way the younger generation relates with older people.
In Korea, young people shoul respect old people in many ways like the words, behaviors, and so on.
>> In Korea, young people should respect their elderlies. They should convey respect through their words, behaviors, and so on.
So it is really hard to aproach to old people first.
>> That\'s why it is really hard to deal with older people. If I could change one, I want to change this..so we caould be closer each other..^^>> If I could change one thing in our traditions and practices, I would change this so we could be closer to each other. ^^
1. I am speaking to you. I have spoken to you.>> CORRECT!
2. That man is driving a car. That man has driven a car.
>> CORRECT!3. My friend is s[이름]ping. My friend has slept .
>> CORRECT!4. She is in Prague. She has been in Prague.
>> CORRECT!5. They are arguing about money. They have argued money.
>> They are arguing about money. They have argued about money.
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