HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there,
Thank you for answering your homework.
I can see you\'re trying hard to learn. Your discipline is good, keep it up. Keep applying in your daily life what you learn everyday. Knowledge will give you power. Power will give the confidence that you need. You can do it, if others can, so can you. Enjoy your day! ^^
When I read this homework, I was ahocked because it is what I do every morning.
>>When I read this homework, I was shocked because it is what I do every morning.
One thing that I was so brave is when I quit the university.
>>One thing that I was brave of, is when I quit university.
Normarlly, I couldn\'t decide what I want..so I ask people some advice.
>>Normally, I don\'t know what I want so, I asked for some advises.
however I was so brave to quit the school and found another university which
was good for me..
>>However, I was so brave to quit school and I was able to find a good university for me.
Yesterday I had a really bad day.
>>correct
>>I had a really bad day yesterday.
I woke up at 9 o\'clock because I forgot to set my alarm clock the night before.
>>correct
I got up as fast as I could and I put on some clothes.
>>correct
I ran into the kitchen and made myself a cup of coffee.
>>correct
Then I drank the coffee very fast and I ran to my car.
>>Then I drank the coffee as fast as I could and ran to my car.
It was a terrible morning!
>>correct
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