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I hit my laptop a few months ago. It was a big fault. After hitting, my laptop didn't work. I should go to repair shop. If I go there, I may pay lots of money. I really regret my action.
강사 첨삭
I am so sorry to hear that, Adam!
Maybe getting a new laptop will be better ;)
Of course, after saving some money^^
I hit my laptop a few months ago.
>>I accidentally hit my laptop a few months ago.
It was a big fault.
>>CORRECT!
After hitting, my laptop didn\'t work.
>>CORRECT!
I should go to repair shop.
>>CORRECT!
If I go there, I may pay lots of money.
>>CORRECT!
I really regret my action.
>>CORRECT!
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