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2015-10-21 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. I was so relieved that you were fine today. I hope that this typhoon will pass over. Is society too dependent on technology? Explain your answer in not less than three sentences. Although there are many fields that technology does not have priority such as art and literature, it is true that more and more people have been dependent on technology than before. It is therefore not surprising that music, which is recognized as the area of human, can be completed with the help of technology. Judging from these, modern society is unquestionably dependent on technology.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. Technology is indeed helping us progress and improve, but at the same time, it is the bane of our existence. Thanks for putting in your two cents about this. Take care! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! I was so relieved that you were fine today. >> CORRECT! I hope that this typhoon will pass over.>> CORRECT! Although there are many fields that technology does not have priority such as art and literature, it is true that more and more people have been dependent on technology than before. >> Although there are many fields where technology is not prioritized, such as art and literature, it is true that people have been more dependent on technology than before. It is therefore not surprising that music, which is recognized as the area of human, can be completed with the help of technology. >> It is therefore not surprising that music can be completed with the help of technology. *I don\'t understand what you mean by \"which is recognized as the area of human\". Can you explain further in our class? ^^ Judging from these, modern society is unquestionably dependent on technology. >> CORRECT!

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