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As for me, I' m not attracted to dangerous sports or other similar activities
but, there are some people who enjoy something dangerous not to recommend. I think maybe that is related stimulation. Whatever it is, it is definitely true that people are attracted by any stimulation such as spicy taste, workout, suggestive scene and so on. In terms of sports, it will be also applicable with that idea and I've ever heard that feeling pain during hard working out stimulate in case of man by expert. And also men can go into ecstasy from that. Surprisingly, even though I don't like to enjoy something dangerous but I also used to enjoy speed while I learned how to drive. Like this, I think all related with these reactions is instinct of person.
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Thank you for writing your thoughts about the presented topic. ~~~
The \"stimulation\" felt in doing anything dangerous could be called \"adrenalin rush\". ^^
Good job all in all. ~~
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==Teacher Charlie==
As for me, I\' m not attracted to dangerous sports or other similar activitiesbut, there are some people who enjoy something dangerous not to recommend. I think maybe that is related stimulation.
>> I\'m not attracted to dangerous sports or other similar activities but there are some people who enjoy these activities for stimulation which I personally would not recommend doing.
Whatever it is, it is definitely true that people are attracted by any stimulation such as spicy taste, workout, suggestive scene and so on.
>> Whatever their reason is, it is definitely true that there are some people who are stimulated by various factors like workouts, certain flavors, suggestive scenes and so on.
In terms of sports, it will be also applicable with that idea and I\'ve ever heard that feeling pain during hard working out stimulate in case of man by expert. And also men can go into ecstasy from that.
>> This could also be true in terms of sports wherein I have heard from the experts of men getting an adrenalin rush and the feeling of well-being when experiencing pain during hard workouts.
Surprisingly, even though I don\'t like to enjoy something dangerous but I also used to enjoy speed while I learned how to drive. Like this, I think all related with these reactions is instinct of person.
>> Surprisingly, even though I don\'t enjoy doing anything dangerous, I did enjoy speeding up when I was learning how to drive. From this, I could say that these reactions are instinctive.
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