Homework

2015-10-21 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: If you could invite five people to a dinner party, who would they be? What is each guest like? Explain in a maximum of 5 sentences. If I can, I want to invite my friends, Jisoo, Hyojung, Jiwon, Jieun, Eunjung. Who I couldn't see on this year. Because 3 of them are re-try to get in College. We has many stories to talk with. Next month finally the Korean SAT is over, so I can see them. Anyway, it was realistic story. And now, it's the fantasy story. kk. If I can, I want to invite Ironman, and my idol who came to my dream before, and 2 of Minions, and you! I want to meet you someday. I will go your country someday.

강사 첨삭

Good Evening, [이름]! Thank you for answering your homework and having a good sense of humor. Hehehe! I wish to meet you soon too! I think we can have a lot of things to share! :) I know you may have a lot of people in mind but I think these people really made an impact in your life that it makes them really special for you. See you later!   Teacher Carmen ^^   HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:If you could invite five people to a dinner party, who would they be? What is each guest like? Explain in a maximum of 5 sentences.If I can, I want to invite my friends, Jisoo, Hyojung, Jiwon, Jieun, Eunjung. >> If I can invite five people to a dinner party, I want to invite Jisoo, Hyojung, Jiwon, Jieun and Eunjung.   Who I couldn\'t see on this year. >> They are the people who I didn\'t see this year.   Because 3 of them are re-try to get in College. >> It is because 3 of them are trying to enter college again.   We has many stories to talk with. >> We have many stories to share. OR>> We have a lot of stories to talk about.   Next month finally the Korean SAT is over, so I can see them. >> The Korean SAT will be over next month so I can finally see them.Anyway, it was realistic story. >> Anyway, it was a realistic story.   And now, it\'s the fantasy story. kk. >> And now, it\'s a fantasy story. kk.   If I can, I want to invite Ironman, and my idol who came to my dream before, and 2 of Minions, and you! >> If I can I want to invite Ironmon, my idol who appeared in my dream before, 2 of the Minions and you.   I want to meet you someday. >> Correct!   I will go your country someday. >> I will go to your country someday.

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