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2015-10-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I struggle to think positive thought. Once I had more negativity than positivity.. Then my life was influenced because of negative thinking. So I struggle to change thinking in order to become positive person.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition! Whoa! I guess you are really studying hard these days. Keep it up! I hope you can prepare very well for your exam. You can do it! Take care and talk to you later! T. JanE ^^ I struggle to think positive thought.>> I struggle to think positively.  Once, I had more negativity than positivity. >> Correct Then my life was influenced because of negative thinking.>> Then my life was influenced by negative thoughts.  So I struggle to change thinking in order to become positive person. >> So I struggle to change my way of thinking and to become a positive person.   

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