Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Explain how to entertain guests who unexpectedly arrive at your home in a maximum of 5 sentences.
I will make her dinner. And while eating the dinner, having a talk with her. (Sorry, it's too short, I don't have any idea. T^T)
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Anyway, today's episode was really nice! Today and tomorrow will be the highlight scences of this drama I think. If you have some time, you should watch it once in your life.(kkkk) Oh my god, I'm shooted heart attack. See you!
강사 첨삭
A very beautiful Evening to you, [이름]!
I am so surprised to receive your homework right away! kkk.. ^^
But I commend you fro always doing it. You just need to remember the grammar corrections, but the thought of it is correct!
Thank you for always recommending me to watch that drama. I wish I can have time to do that this weekend!
I want to experience the same thing you have. I like watching romantic comedy films or dramas, so I think I will really love that!
I wish to watch it with you! Hahaha! Maybe we will both have a heart attack! See you! Good night! :)
Teacher Carmen ^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Explain how to entertain guests who unexpectedly arrive at your home in a maximum of 5 sentences.I will make her dinner.
>> I will make her dinner.
OR>> I will cook for dinner.
And while eating the dinner, having a talk with her.
>> And while eating dinner, we will have a conversation.
(Sorry, it\'s too short, I don\'t have any idea. T^T)
>> Sorry, it\'s too short. I don\'t have any idea. T^T---Anyway, today\'s episode was really nice!
>> Correct!
Today and tomorrow will be the highlight scences of this drama I think.
>> I think they will highlight scenes in this drama today and tomorrow.
If you have some time, you should watch it once in your life.(kkkk)
>> You should watch it once if you have some time.
Oh my god, I\'m shooted heart attack.
>> Oh my god! I had a heart attack! </3
See you!
>> Correct!
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