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Hello, Miss [이름]!
Thank you once again for your concern. ^^ I am really touched. ^^ Though a lot were destroyed, I\'m glad our city is starting to fix the damage done by the typhoon.
Great friends are really hard to find and I think friendships that last for 10 years or more is amazing. In this day and age where we can know about our friends online, there is almost no need to meet and catch up anymore. And as time goes by it\'s getting more and more difficult to keep the friendship.
But I\'d love to hear about your stories. They are always wonderful to me. ^^
See you later!
Teacher Anne
It was good to see you again in our class!
>> Correct!
I am so happy that you are safe..^^
>> Correct!
But I think that somethings are destroyed..
>> But I think many things were destroyed.
I hope that everything will be fine as soon as possible.
>> Correct!
You are right that I am lucky...I have so many great friends around me like you..^^
>> Correct!
I think thatI am not a great person as good as they treat me well...^^;
(hard to explain)
>> I think I am not as good as I want to be, but they treat me well. It\'s hard to explain.
I am really thankful and admire my friends because they really help me alot whenever I need somebody...
>> I am really thankful and I admire my friends because they help me lots of times whenever I need somebody
when I was a beginner in teaching...I would like to tell you mor about this story...
>> when I was new to the teaching profession.
saddly, There is no more space..let\'s talk in the class..^^
>> Sadly, there is no more space. Let\'s talk about it in class. ^^
Have a good weekend and always thanks...^^
>> Have a good weekend and thanks again.
1.This can be dangerous if you don’t have the right equipment.
>>Correct!
2.You shouldn\'t yell at your parents. It’s not nice.
>>Correct!
3.I must have seen that movie eight times.
>>Correct!
4.I can’t allow you to hang around here.= I shouldn\'t have you hanging around here.
>>Correct!
5.P1: Isn’t that Charlie’s umbrella?
P2: Yes, he must have left it here yesterday.
>>Correct!
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