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2015-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: If you could only eat one food for the rest of your life, what would it be? Describe it and explain why you’d choose it in a maximum of 5 sentences. If I need to eat only one food for the rest of my life, I will choose the korean food, Bibimbap. It's because, Bibimbap include many vegetables, and taste is good! And I can regulate the amount of chilly souce, so I can eat every time differently. Sometimes eat saulty, sometimes eat blandly. That's why I choose it. --- It was too severe question to me. I don't want to emagine about that. I love to eat, and eating is one of the reasons that why I have to live. There are so many delicious foods in the world. Oh my. kk. See you later.

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An awesome Friday to you, [이름]! How are you? I hope that you are having a great day today. Anyway, thank you for answering your homework. I am pleased that you are always doing your best to study English despite of your busy schedule. You did a good job and keep it up!! I think your answer is very interesting and wise. I hope to share a meal such as Bibimbap with you soon! See you later! :)   Teacher Carmen     HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:If you could only eat one food for the rest of your life, what would it be? Describe it and explain why you’d choose it in a maximum of 5 sentences.If I need to eat only one food for the rest of my life, I will choose the korean food, Bibimbap. >> Correct!   It\'s because, Bibimbap include many vegetables, and taste is good! >> It\'s because Bibimbap includes many vegetables and it also tastes good. And I can regulate the amount of chilly souce, so I can eat every time differently. >> And I can regulate the amount of chili sauce so that I can eat it differently every time.   Sometimes eat saulty, sometimes eat blandly. >> Sometimes I eat salty or bland food.   That\'s why I choose it. >> That\'s why I chose it.---It was too severe question to me. >> It was a difficult question for me.   I don\'t want to emagine about that. >> I don\'t want to imagine that.   I love to eat, and eating is one of the reasons that why I have to live. >> I love to eat and eating is one of the reasons why I am surviving.   There are so many delicious foods in the world. >> There are so many delicious food in the world.   Oh my. kk. See you later. >>Correct!

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