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2015-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

1. The Evil Prince was very generous. 2. He traveled to many different towns. 3. He stole the treasures of other lands. 4. The people of his kingdom hailed him for his accomplishments. 5. He believed the people when they said that he was great. 6. He commanded that the people construct a ship. 7. He has not even fear God. 8. He planned to fly his ship to heaven. 9. God s a swarm of gnats to combat the Prince. 10. One tiny gnat defeated the Prince.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   Well done. Keep it up! Some reminders: 1. The present perfect is formed from the present tense of the verb have and the past participle of a verb example: has feared 2. \'Evil\' is a negative word so it makes sense that he is \'proud\'.   Teacher Venus^^   1. The Evil Prince was very generous. >>>The Evil Prince was very proud. 2. He traveled to many different towns. >>>CORRECT3. He stole the treasures of other lands. >>>CORRECT4. The people of his kingdom hailed him for his accomplishments. >>>CORRECT5. He believed the people when they said that he was great.>>>CORRECT 6. He commanded that the people construct a ship.>>>CORRECT 7. He has not even fear God.>>>did 8. He planned to fly his ship to heaven.>>>CORRECT 9. God s a swarm of gnats to combat the Prince. >>>sent10. One tiny gnat defeated the Prince. >>>CORRECT

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