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2015-10-26 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Good evening, teacher. This weekend was the peak of the beautiful fall foliage in Seoul. We have a variety of trees in our apartment garden, and they look very fantastic now. Enjoy your weekend, and see you on Monday. Imagine that you time-traveled to the future. Think about one thing - a trend, a gadget, an electronic product or a place - that you would see there. For example, flying cars or androids. BE CREATIVE! If I time-travel to the future, I'm sure that I could see the technology which enables us to acquire foreign languages through having a shot. Humans have developed several devices to overcome the language barrier such as an automatic translation machine. It is however insufficient to meet human's high expectations. Advanced technology could make us speak foreign languages fluently even though we are not native speakers.

강사 첨삭

Hello Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework! That is quite an interesting invention. I would love to be able to speak other foreign languages like Italian, French, Japanese and Korean with just a shot too.   Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Good evening, teacher. >> CORRECT! This weekend was the peak of the beautiful fall foliage in Seoul.>> CORRECT! We have a variety of trees in our apartment garden, and they look very fantastic now. >> CORRECT! Enjoy your weekend, and see you on Monday. >> CORRECT! If I time-travel to the future, I\'m sure that I could see the technology which enables us to acquire foreign languages through having a shot. >> CORRECT! >> remove \'having\'Humans have developed several devices to overcome the language barrier such as an automatic translation machine. >> CORRECT! It is however insufficient to meet human\'s high expectations. >> It is, however, insufficient to meet the humans\' high expectations.Advanced technology could make us speak foreign languages fluently even though we are not native speakers. >> CORRECT!  

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