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2015-10-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

I also happy to meet you again, though we also have long time by next class. See you soon. Take care^^ 1.The place where the Buddha got enlightenment is called Bodh Gaya. 2. Those boys who do not return the library books by the due date will have to pay a fine. 3. The mem who has just spoken is a Member of Parliament. 4. All the planets which belong to the solar system move around the sun. 5. This new building which the villagers have built is for a school. 6. Men who went to the Raja for help never returned empty-handed. 7. The loud noise of the sudden explosion woke up everybody in the neighborhood.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름], Great job in your homework!!! I can see you\'re trying hard to learn. Your discipline is good, keep it up. Keep applying in your daily life what you learn everyday. Knowledge will give you power. Power will give the confidence that you need.  You can do it, if others can, so can you. Enjoy your day! ^^T. Jeny   I also happy to meet you again, though we also have long time by next class. >>I was also happy to meet you again, but we won\'t meet each other next week.See you soon. Take care^^>>correct1.The place where the Buddha got enlightenment is called Bodh Gaya. >>correct2. Those boys who do not return the library books by the due date will have to pay a fine. >>correct3. The man who has just spoken is a Member of Parliament. >>correct4. All the planets which belong to the solar system move around the sun. >>correct5. This new building which the villagers have built is for a school. >>correct6. Men who went to the Raja for help never returned empty-handed. >>Learned men who went to the Raja for help never returned empty-handed.7. The loud noise of the sudden explosion woke up everybody in the neighborhood. >>correct

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