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I want to invent machinery that can make people to be tall because I am not tall. These days height is essential because people put more importance on height. Tall men are favored more than short men. So I want to invent that machine.
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Wow that\'s perfect, Adam ;)
Invent an efficient machine and give it to me, ha! ha!
I want to invent machinery that can make people to be tall because I am not tall.
>>I want to invent a machine that can make people tall because I am not tall.
These days height is essential because people put more importance on height.
>>CORRECT!
Tall men are favored more than short men.
>> Tall men are favored more than short ones.
So I want to invent that machine.
>>CORRECT!
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