Homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
What’s one thing you could never live without and why? Explain in 5 sentences.
It will be my laptop. It's because, nowadays are the generation of IT. Everything is related with Network. If I don't have my laptop, I can't do study, homework, communicate at anywhere. So I think my laptop is my important thing to live.
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Good Evening, [이름]!
How are you doing? I hope you had a great weekend. Anyway, thank you for answering your homework.
I know how busy you are but you continue to answer your homework everyday. I agree with your answers too. I commend you for that.
Great job! See you later! I\'m so excited to hear your stories.
Teacher Carmen ^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:What’s one thing you could never live without and why? Explain in 5 sentences.It will be my laptop.
>> Correct!
It\'s because, nowadays are the generation of IT.
>> It\'s because we are in the information technology generation nowadays.
Everything is related with Network.
>> Everything is related with networking.
If I don\'t have my laptop, I can\'t do study, homework, communicate at anywhere.
>> I can\'t study, do my homework or communicate anywhere if I don\'t have my laptop with me.
So I think my laptop is my important thing to live.
>> So I\'m thinking that my laptop is the most important thing that I could not live without.
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