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2015-10-27 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. I am preparing my presentaion for next week. I'd like to ask you to read and reveiw some of them. Please, help me this week.^^ To avoid conceptual confusion, Parekh begins with the defining of 'hate speech'. According to him, hate speech expresses, encourages, stirs up, or incites hatred against a group of individuals distinguished by a particular feature or set of features such as race, ethnicity, gender, religion, nationality, and sexual orientation. Next, he presents three essential features as follows. First, it is directed against a specified or easily identifiable individual or a group of individuals based on an arbitrary and normatively irrelevant feature. Second, it stigmatizes the target group as highly undesirable by ascribing to their qualities. Third, the target group is considered as a legitimate object of hostility due to its negative qualities. This leads to hate speech purporting to justify discrimination based on its negative qualities.

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Hi Kaylee! Wow. I\'m happy to say that your sentences were spot on! I didn\'t notice any corrections from them. Good job! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! I am preparing my presentaion for next week. >> CORRECT! >> presentation I\'d like to ask you to read and reveiw some of them. >> CORRECT! >> review Please, help me this week.^^>> Please help me out this week. To avoid conceptual confusion, Parekh begins with the defining of \'hate speech\'. >> CORRECT! According to him, hate speech expresses, encourages, stirs up, or incites hatred against a group of individuals distinguished by a particular feature or set of features such as race, ethnicity, gender, religion, nationality, and sexual orientation. >> CORRECT! Next, he presents three essential features as follows. >> CORRECT! First, it is directed against a specified or easily identifiable individual or a group of individuals based on an arbitrary and normatively irrelevant feature.>> CORRECT! Second, it stigmatizes the target group as highly undesirable by ascribing to their qualities. >> CORRECT! Third, the target group is considered as a legitimate object of hostility due to its negative qualities. >> CORRECT! This leads to hate speech purporting to justify discrimination based on its negative qualities. >> CORRECT!

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