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2015-10-27 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Hello!! It is good to read your letters.. Right!! there are some magic words that people make fell better or good. In my case, when I started learning English, my teacher told me that I had to say please...I realized that my words were so strong to the others.. Some people might understand me but not all..Right? Words are really important in the relationship!! 1. I blew a tire on the way to work. (to blow) 2. We have driven to the seaside resort many times. (to drive) 3. I haven't riddena bike in three years. (to ride) 4. Someone has stolen 10 books from the library. (to steal) 5. Godzilla rose up and began attacking the city. (to rise)

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Hello, Miss [이름]! Indeed! Words have power, although we often forget how simple words can affect others. When it comes to compliments, I think it is sometimes to difficult to tell which one is sincere and which one is not, especially for women! ^^ We often fall for sweet words and it can be a bit dangerous sometimes. But in any case, it still pays to speak kindly when we can. ^^ Thank you for sharing your thoughts in today\'s homework! See you tomorrow! Teacher Anne   It is good to read your letters..>> Correct! Right!! there are some magic words that people make fell better or good. >> Right! There are some magic words that either make people feel good or bad.In my case, when I started learning English, my teacher told me that I had to say please... >> Correct! I realized that my words were so strong to the others.. >> Correct!Some people might understand me but not all..Right? >> Some people might understand me, but not everyone will. Right?Words are really important in the relationship!! >> Correct!1. I blew a tire on the way to work. (to blow) >> Correct!2. We have driven to the seaside resort many times. (to drive) >> Correct!3. I haven\'t riddena bike in three years. (to ride) >> Correct! [ridden a]4. Someone has stolen 10 books from the library. (to steal) >> Correct!5. Godzilla rose up and began attacking the city. (to rise) >> Correct!

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