Homework

Good morning, Erine! Firstly, I am grateful to have my class with you on SKYPE. Actually, I got used to my previous teacher's pronunciation, so I have been worried if I would be unable to understand what you say. Well, I think I need more time to be accustomed with your fast speed and good pronunciation. Today, we were getting to know each other, and that was a nice talk. I like your witty and bouncy personality, and it seems to make me happy. I will be expecting for our class tomorrow. See you! *Essay Generally, children need to be taken care of by their parent. Mother and father's roles are different. If they don't care for their children because of their divorce, it might affect them badly. Of course, we can't say that all parents who are divorced are not good at taking care of their children. No matter if they are together or not, as long as they can carry their weight to their children, I am sure that they can care for them successfully. If the parents who are divorced can't afford to look after their offspring, our government needs to take action. Most of all, since they already became someone's parent, they should try to take responsibilities to the end.

Good morning, [이름]!^^ Please check the corrections I did on you composition part. Hence, thank you for doing your homework.^^ You are really diligent and funny!^^ Our class is really exciting so I am also looking forward to spending time with you tomorrrow!Keep up the good work! See you tomorrow! ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Erine! >> CorrectFirstly, I am grateful to have my class with you on SKYPE. >>CorrectActually, I got used to my previous teacher\'s pronunciation, so I have been worried if I would be unable to understand what you say. >> CorrectWell, I think I need more time to be accustomed with your fast speed and good pronunciation. >> Correct (I apologize if I have a fast speed but thank you for appreciating my pronunciation!^^_)Today, we were getting to know each other, and that was a nice talk. >> Today, we have got to know more of each other and that was a nice conversation.I like your witty and bouncy personality, and it seems to make me happy. >> I like your witty and bouncy personality and they seem to make me happy.I will be expecting for our class tomorrow. >> CorrectSee you! >> Correct*EssayGenerally, children need to be taken care of by their parent. >> Generally, children need to be taken care of by their parents.Mother and father\'s roles are different. >> The parents\' roles are different.If they don\'t care for their children because of their divorce, it might affect them badly. >> Correct Of course, we can\'t say that all parents who are divorced are not good at taking care of their children. >> CorrectNo matter if they are together or not, as long as they can carry their weight to their children, I am sure that they can care for them successfully. >> It doesn\'t matter if they are together or not, as long as they can carry their children weigh, I am sure that they can care for them successfully. If the parents who are divorced can\'t afford to look after their offspring, our government needs to take action. >> CorrectMost of all, since they already became someone\'s parent, they should try to take responsibilities to the end.>> Correct (**However, I will ask you to explain this one further tomorrow.)