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2015-10-27 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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Describe your ideal town or city, why you would want to live there, and what you would do there. I want to live the city of coexist civilization with antique. It's because if I fall away from civilization, it will be hard and uncomfortable to live. And I'm such a sensitive person, and antique things make me relax. If in reality, the city like there is exist, I want to move at there. -- An miniute ago, I received a message from professor while I studying hard for tomorrow's exam. It was, "the exam is delayed on next week. because of prof's health problem.". OH MY GOD. I felt very very very futility. I know his health problem is very serious, and I need to worry about him, but this is the period of mid-term! If he notice me more earlier, I can get the time for study and prepare the other exam more longer. Wow.. anyway from now, I will study for other subject examination, secure programming. And we can meet at tonight! This one is only thing that I feel happy now. See you.

강사 첨삭

A pleasant day to you, [이름]! How are you feeling now? I hope that you studied well for your exams. I feel bad about your teacher\'s health condition. I hope he\'ll get well soon. Don\'t worry about him that much. Instead, let us just pray that he will get over his sickness and be able to go back to work. I am so excted to see you later! Have a great day!   Teacher Carmen ^^   Describe your ideal town or city, why you would want to live there, and what you would do there.I want to live the city of coexist civilization with antique. >> I want to live in a city wherein the ancient cand modern civilization coexist.   It\'s because if I fall away from civilization, it will be hard and uncomfortable to live. >> It\'s because it will be hard and uncomfortable to live if I stay away from modern civilization.   And I\'m such a sensitive person, and antique things make me relax. >> I\'m such a sensitive person and I feel relaxed looking at antiques.   If in reality, the city like there is exist, I want to move at there. >> If there is a city that exists that way in real life then I want to move there.--An miniute ago, I received a message from professor while I studying hard for tomorrow\'s exam. >> I received a message from my professor a minute ago while I was studying hard for tomorrow\'s exam.   It was, \"the exam is delayed on next week. because of prof\'s health problem.\". OH MY GOD. >> It says that the exam will be delayed until next week because my professor is experiencing a health problem. Oh my god!   I felt very very very futility. >> YOU MEAN TO SAY. It feels useless to review for the exam.   I know his health problem is very serious, and I need to worry about him, but this is the period of mid-term! >> I know that his health problem is very serious and I feel worried about him especially in this period wherein we are about to take the midterm exams.   If he notice me more earlier, I can get the time for study and prepare the other exam more longer. >> If he noticed me earlier, I can get have more time to study and prepare for the exams.   Wow.. anyway from now, I will study for other subject examination, secure programming. >>Wow! Anyway, I will just study another subject which is Secure Programming from now on.   And we can meet at tonight! >> And we can meet tonight!   This one is only thing that I feel happy now. >> This is the only reason why I feel happy now.   See you. >> Correct!

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